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Flower by ~SasukesWolfBabe:iconSasukesWolfBabe:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Spoken Word


He loves me.

he loves me not.

He loves me.

He loves me not.

He loves me.

I hope he loves me not.

I'm listening to the clock.

Hearing it go tick tock.

Looking for my fave song.

And trying so hard to stay calm.

The world is circling me.

I'm finding it so hard to breathe.

My heart begins to ach.

Then my body begins to shake.

I'm still lying here on the floor.

I fell after he walked through that door.

I wish him well.

I also wish he would burn in hell.

Why can't he see?

All these cracks forming on me....

Maybe he just doesn't care.

He's like an addiction.

Like my own personal brand of heroin.

I have,for him,a favor.

It involves his beastly behavior...

If you don't love me....

Stop lieing to me and go away.

I don't know why...

But I used to believe all his lies.

He said he loved me.

He vowed to protect me.

Though all he did was hurt me.

The cracks got bigger.

He had a gun and wished he'd pull the trigger.

All those times the flowers have been wrong.

He loves me not.
©2009 ~SasukesWolfBabe
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Author's Comments

I had written this a while back when something had been happening.Ok for those who don't get the whole,he loves me,heloves me not,and flower thing,well when you pulled off a petal you would say,he loves me or he loves me not.And what ever it landed on,it would be your answer.

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!hajs5 May 2, 2009, 8:24:03 PM
So this poem isn't relevant to us right now...is it?

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Anonymous:"Spread the love!"

Me:"Spread it like AIDS!"

Anonymous:"YEAH! wait what?"
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~SasukesWolfBabe May 2, 2009, 8:26:12 PM
hell no.As I stated in the artist comments thing.I had written it a while back.

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Sammi:Ugh your drunk!That makes you a loser!D<
Me:*holding a beer bottle*Yeah I'm drunk.But in the morning, I'll be sober.And you'll still be ugly.Sooooo whos' the real loser?>_>'
Sammi: D< *walks away*
Me:Yeah,thats what I thought,bitch.
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!hajs5 May 2, 2009, 8:27:23 PM
k good :/

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Anonymous:"Spread the love!"

Me:"Spread it like AIDS!"

Anonymous:"YEAH! wait what?"
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
~SasukesWolfBabe May 2, 2009, 8:28:45 PM
Well to be honest some bits of it were rerences to lots of things/ppl.

--
Sammi:Ugh your drunk!That makes you a loser!D<
Me:*holding a beer bottle*Yeah I'm drunk.But in the morning, I'll be sober.And you'll still be ugly.Sooooo whos' the real loser?>_>'
Sammi: D< *walks away*
Me:Yeah,thats what I thought,bitch.
:iconhajs5:
!hajs5 May 2, 2009, 8:29:48 PM
mmk

--
Anonymous:"Spread the love!"

Me:"Spread it like AIDS!"

Anonymous:"YEAH! wait what?"
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
~SasukesWolfBabe May 2, 2009, 8:31:10 PM
mhn

--
Sammi:Ugh your drunk!That makes you a loser!D<
Me:*holding a beer bottle*Yeah I'm drunk.But in the morning, I'll be sober.And you'll still be ugly.Sooooo whos' the real loser?>_>'
Sammi: D< *walks away*
Me:Yeah,thats what I thought,bitch.
:iconhajs5:
!hajs5 May 2, 2009, 8:32:26 PM
drugs are bad mmmk

--
Anonymous:"Spread the love!"

Me:"Spread it like AIDS!"

Anonymous:"YEAH! wait what?"
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
~SasukesWolfBabe May 2, 2009, 8:32:47 PM
....No shit

--
Sammi:Ugh your drunk!That makes you a loser!D<
Me:*holding a beer bottle*Yeah I'm drunk.But in the morning, I'll be sober.And you'll still be ugly.Sooooo whos' the real loser?>_>'
Sammi: D< *walks away*
Me:Yeah,thats what I thought,bitch.
:iconhajs5:
!hajs5 May 2, 2009, 8:33:46 PM
smoking's bad mmmk

--
Anonymous:"Spread the love!"

Me:"Spread it like AIDS!"

Anonymous:"YEAH! wait what?"
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